I mean, the art style is cute in my opinion, but it IS just a loop of a potato thrusting from various angles, so I can't rate too highly. Wasn't very high res, but I do see the potential, and encourage you to keep animating.
Thanks for the feedback, the low quality was because I made it on a phone.
Dude this was awesome! I love how you used the original commercial down to a tee, and the "Crazy good" ending was just icing on the cake (or in this case, the pop tart). The only MINOR vice I had was the gun, personally it just seemed a bit out of place, art wise, but overall this was a fantastic production.
That. Was. Awesome. Great animation/shading techniques, and I really enjoyed what you did with the camera view, i.e (zooming out on the Charmeleon as he let out screams of anguish.) There was one thing pestering me, and keeping you for a five star rating. I kinda just don't like when people use a copyrighted materials' script. Of course this isn't a bad thing, or taboo in any way, just my personal opinion. I think the icing on the cake may have been altering the original script to fit in a more Pokemon-based parody, but then I understand how voice acting would've been an issue. Overall, great animation, and keep up the awesome work!
That's completely fair and I totally agree. As TomFulp said in his news post, I'll never really have rights over this animation because of the audio. It was just something I wanted to make and in the end I'm glad I finished it. Thanks for the balanced review!
This is some great stick animation! With a little bit more practice and refined movements, the squeal would be a front page movie in my opinion! I also thought it was cool that you used "Megalovania" in the video, but in future, you may want to consider crediting the artist (Toby Fox). Overall, I thought this was a cool stick fight, and encourage you to continue your animation!
Thank you very much! C:
I didn't think it was too bad, and like DJMoonWolf said, the last part was well written. I like the art style, but in my opinion I think it could do with a bit less outside media, (like the clip art, and "TRIGGERED" screenshot), but overall it was pretty cool! Keep it up! I'll be sure to share your content around!
I never really considered how using, 'Outside Media' would negatively effect my videos. Thanks to you, I will try and animate almost everything in my videos from now on!
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